Goldilocks was a girl with golden curls. She liked to walk by herself in the woods. when she walked in the woods she smell porridge she walk a little bit longer and there she seen a cottage the door was open and nobody was home. She walked in and caught sight of the porridge. She saw a table with 3 dishes and she was very hungry she start to eat.
She eat up all the porrage in the smallest dishes becouse that porrage was very good.
Then she go to the bedroom there she saw three beds she was very tierd and she was fall asleep as soon as she laid do. The bears came home again and saw that someone had eaten from their porridge. when they saw that it was a cute little girl in their bed she woke up and be so scared so she run home, she will never go to the wood again.
A good summary!
SvaraRaderaAlways check the verbs carefully! They should all be in the same tense (tidsform)
---she smelled--she walked---she saw---she started---
---she ate all the porridge in the smallest of the dishes because----
---she went---she fell asleep---she ran ----